Aiden Monroe

[Luca]

Okay Aiden, your application still needs just a bit of work. First off with your appearence you have a mix of real pbs and an anime. While im sure you like the design, that section is for your characters appearence only, plus we don't like to mix real pbs and anime. Second off could you flesh out the appearence section? I hate that section too but even I have to rank it up to standards. Thirdly you need to flesh out your inner personaility section. As for your powers they are completly unrelated and in fact you have a lot of them. PLease also explain more about each power and give each one a weakness. For your history I'm a bit confused. You said he just felt pain in his head and he instantly knew he was special. Hun if im having a head splitting pain im not feeling special in fact im reaching for asprin. Also how does he know about his powers and is using them as if he mastered it? Also your current answer of yes you read the rules doesn't work. We have a codeword and yes is not it.

-Luca